Story development topic

Different55 · 2012-02-03 16:55:57

Post pieces of the story you want to be added. Include characters, location, and other details.

Facts:

Protagonist starts in Noob Town
Antagonist team is Team Troll
Bobithan is the rival?
Elite four is actually 4
Linus21 and Supermen2 kidnap in mid-game
- Rescued later
- Ice Flower is among those kidnapped.
- Get <item> from Ice after rescued
Protagonist comes from the land of EE
Supermen and Linus are leaders of Team Troll
Ratburntro44 is secondary antagonist who turns out to be good
- similar to balrog in cave story?

Storyline:

Start off waking up in your bed in Noob Town. You are woken up by your mother (name needed) and told to go visit Prof. Different (Hamsta). You get the [sarcasm=I'm lying]normal[/sarcasm] lecture about pokemon and whatnot, then you get to pick a starter. (I think you should have to complete a task before being able to choose a starter) Rival picks opposite and challenges you to a battle. You win. You set off on your journey, possibly talk to a few people on Route Eno (one, since I believe ! is an invalid character), and arrive in Shop City, where Team Troll is starting a riot in <location>. To be continued...

Muffin · 2012-02-03 17:28:37

Make Bobithan your rival. Have the elite four only have 4 people... Have the selection during the elite four like in black/white.

Ice Flower · 2012-02-03 17:51:29

In the middle of the game, have supermen2 and Linus kidnap some of the NPCs and bring them to the Lavender Tower. You save me, and then I give you something.

rob1nfly · 2012-02-03 18:45:31

I would like to be a game writer.

You wake up in Noob Town, after moving from the neighboring state EE. You get a yell from your mom telling you go to the proffesser's lab. Then there's the typical wall of text lecture, and you get to choose a starter (already established). Then Gary Oak Clone come's up, is a badass, and picks the opposite type. Then BATTLE, route ! (one), go to Shop City. You see Team Cool having a Failèmon riot thing.
-END OF WRITING PART UNO-

SilverHeart · 2012-02-03 19:04:21

rob1nfly wrote:

I would like to be a game writer.
You wake up in Noob Town, after moving from the neighboring state EE. You get a yell from your mom telling you go to the proffesser's lab. Then there's the typical wall of text lecture, and you get to choose a starter (already established). Then Gary Oak Clone come's up, is a badass, and picks the opposite type. Then BATTLE, route ! (one), go to Shop City. You see Team Cool having a Failèmon riot thing.
-END OF WRITING PART UNO-

but I wanna be the story writer.

supermen and linus should be the leaders of team troll.

Ratburntro44 · 2012-02-03 19:06:03

I want to be the secondary antagonist who turns out to actually also be against the primary antagonist and helps the protagonist in the end.

Different55 · 2012-02-03 20:08:45

Pretty good stuffs, doods n' doodettes.

rob1n and silver have been given Story Writer titles. I have begun putting pieces together now, and there will be a demo release in maybe a week, max.

First post is being updated.

Coolio · 2012-02-03 20:45:49

Can I be the *male* polis in every city?

Different55 · 2012-02-03 21:38:41

I do not understand.

SilverHeart · 2012-02-03 23:37:27

maybe later, team troll can kidnap different the hamster and disguise as him. you then go to <insert place> and save him somehow, learning that team troll needs different to do ____ so that they can catch the legendary pokemon, spambot.

Different55 · 2012-02-04 03:22:19

^I sense the possibility for some funny failing there. We need another sprite that looks barely like a hamster. It needs to be 16x16.

rob1nfly · 2012-02-04 07:06:05

So would'nt this make Team Troll go before Team Cool? Because the hack did happen before The Cool Forums copies us and we put them into forever matenince mode. So I'll go fix that in the first post.

Ice Flower · 2012-02-04 16:59:19

Different55 wrote:

^I sense the possibility for some funny failing there. We need another sprite that looks barely like a hamster. It needs to be 16x16.

On it.

scienceguyz · 2012-02-15 11:32:02

Team Randomness (led by scienceguyz) Helps you by mingling with team troll and setting fire to tents at camp troll, stabbing from within enemy lines, ect.
Then scienceguyz finds a partner, <name that sounds evil/chaotic> becomes corrupted, curses scienceguyz soldiers and betrays scienceguyz. you must capture the Failémon, Sratos that will eat <name>

Last edited by scienceguyz (2012-02-15 11:37:02)

rob1nfly · 2012-02-15 20:27:54

No! That completely contradicts the forums story!

SilverHeart · 2012-02-15 22:26:56

I think team troll should be in the third city instead.

as for the task, you get to different's lab and are told he left for a store to the left of noob town. you go to a small building and inside you see different buying some hamsta food. He apologizes and tells you to meet him in his lab where he gives you and your rival the choice between the three starters. you then set out for ____ town. on your way a dude stops you and asks you if you need a demonstration on how to catch pokemon. either way, he gives you 5 pokeballs and sends you on your way. ___ town is fairly simple, a poke mart and a few houses. in one is a pokecenter like area where you can rest. in another, a woman gives you running shoes.

*note: if possible, later when you defeat team troll's hideout (about halfway through the game) the city will have dirt instead of grass. the people walking around will tell you they're renovating and want to have a big city. they also tell you that some nice men named linus and supermen are paying for it. you have 1 gym to beat afterwards, but then you still have team troll problems, with many grunts saying that soon they would have a new hideout. at the normal point when one defeats the hideouts, professor oak will call(if possible, if not just tell) you that team troll may have a new hideout in ___(second) town. then either

1. oak is snatched by troll grunts and taken away. you return to oak's lab to see if he's ok (if just talking, you simply follow him) and endup at the second town, which has now expanded into a large city. in it's center is a large building that now serves as team troll's hideout. you can't get in, but ratburntro44 gives you the key and tells you where different is. you save him etc etc

2. oak asks you to go to team troll's new hideout in ___(second) town. you go and once there, a grunt pulls off the hamster costume and says it was all a trap. then, you face lots of grunts, basic defeat hideout stuff happens.

Coolio · 2012-02-16 21:18:23

...who's oak?

Muffin · 2012-02-16 22:57:21

^It's Professor Hamster/Different

Make me the water type gym leader for one of the last 3 gyms.

Last edited by Muffin (2012-02-16 22:58:03)

SilverHeart · 2012-02-16 23:41:13

oh yeah... sorry got stuck in pokemon land meant different.

make me the fire last elite four. and make some fire/ghost pokemon.

Coolio · 2012-02-17 17:10:57

Okay, Can I be the third gym leader with a psychic type pokemon?

SilverHeart · 2012-02-17 19:49:11

nevermind

Last edited by SilverHeart (2012-02-17 19:58:22)

Muffin · 2012-02-20 17:39:10

Coolio wrote:

Okay, Can I be the third gym leader with a psychic type pokemon?

3rd gym seems a bit early for psychic, more like 5/6th gym

scienceguyz · 2012-02-21 11:16:39

rob1nfly wrote:

No! That completely contradicts the forums story!

sorry, that's more final fantasy threeish, isn't it?

Coolio · 2012-02-21 13:02:40

Okay, can I use normal types then?

rob1nfly · 2012-02-21 16:11:21

I clearly get ghost.

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